2 thoughts on “DNN: 5 Photo Story”

  1. As we discussed in class, this is a good start in several ways: you’ve kept our attention focused on you so and you’re performing you’re character’s emotions visibly enough that we can identify with you; you develop your character through successive frames; you surprise us (twice!) in the last two frames in a way that takes the story in an interesting direction.

    That said, there are several elements you can improve upon here, mostly to do with matching the background of each frame to what’s happening in the foreground, and perhaps reconsidering how many frames you allot for each moment in the story.

    Keep working on this. 🙂

  2. Something strange seems to have happened: now the blog shows the first cut of this story twice instead of the first and second cuts. Huh.

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